You could add by saying how it was carried around the body. Adding some of the veins, arteries and the chambers of the heart that it passed through. You could elaborate on the Haemoglobin by saying that it contains iron and that one haemoglobin will carry 4 O2 molecules. Also instead of saying burned the glucose say oxidised. Say that the haemoglobin is contained in the red blood cells (Which are not like other cells as they have no DNA or nucleus).......
I was carried in the blood by these a special carrier called the Haemoglobin. The blood was quickly pumped to the entire body. I entered a body part and aerobic reparation began to take place. I burned the glucose and the resulting product was carbon dioxide, water and 38 ATP (adenosine triphosphate) molecules produced in to stages occurring in the cytoplasm and the mitochondria. My job was done.
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I really liked it. You could add by saying how it was carried around the body. Adding some of the veins, arteries and the chambers of the heart that it passed through. You could elaborate on the Haemoglobin by saying that it contains iron and that one haemoglobin will carry 4 O2 molecules. Also instead of saying "burned the glucose" say oxidised. Say that the haemoglobin is contained in the red blood cells (Which are not like other cells as they have no DNA or nucleus).
