my experiment was to find out which fizzy drinks would flatten the quickest, with creaming soda being first, then lemonade, and finally ginger beer. im not too sure about my discussion though, if someone could please read it and let me know... thanks!
My findings confirmed that the contents of a fizzy drink do contribute to the time it takes for the drink to flatten. Fizzy drinks with a lower sugar level were found to flatten quicker than fizzy drinks containing more sugar.
Although various actions were taken to ensure that I got the most accurate results possible, I feel as though the results weren’t too accurate, the main reason for this is that my opinion of when a fizzy drink is considered flat could be different to another person’s.
To make this experiment more accurate, ensure that the room stays at the same temperature, have all the fizzy drinks at the same temperature before testing (for example, pouring one that is at room temperature and then one that is cold out of the fridge) and have more than one person taste the drink to be sure that the drink is completely flat.
After doing some research on the internet, I knew it would take over a good hour for most fizzy drinks to flatten. This applied to the creaming soda and lemonade that was tested; however the ginger beer took a good four hours.
The findings could help thirsty people quite a bit. A person now knows to drink creaming soda if they want a less fizzy drink or ginger beer if they want a drink that will last a while. Society will also be more aware of the contents and sugar levels. The results were consistent, making the experiment a success.
My findings confirmed that the contents of a fizzy drink do contribute to the time it takes for the drink to flatten. Fizzy drinks with a lower sugar level were found to flatten quicker than fizzy drinks containing more sugar.
Although various actions were taken to ensure that I got the most accurate results possible, I feel as though the results weren’t too accurate, the main reason for this is that my opinion of when a fizzy drink is considered flat could be different to another person’s.
To make this experiment more accurate, ensure that the room stays at the same temperature, have all the fizzy drinks at the same temperature before testing (for example, pouring one that is at room temperature and then one that is cold out of the fridge) and have more than one person taste the drink to be sure that the drink is completely flat.
After doing some research on the internet, I knew it would take over a good hour for most fizzy drinks to flatten. This applied to the creaming soda and lemonade that was tested; however the ginger beer took a good four hours.
The findings could help thirsty people quite a bit. A person now knows to drink creaming soda if they want a less fizzy drink or ginger beer if they want a drink that will last a while. Society will also be more aware of the contents and sugar levels. The results were consistent, making the experiment a success.
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Stop writing I this, I knew, I that
The structure of your discussion section should be more like this
(topic sentence-make a statement) then use data from your results section to back up this claim
i.e. This is just one of your sentences
After doing some research on the internet, I knew it would take over a good hour for most fizzy drinks to flatten
Previous research indicates that it would take approximately one hour for most fizzy drinks to flatten (reference where you go this information). This statement is correct as (insert the time that it took for the drinks to flatten)
The structure of your discussion section should be more like this
(topic sentence-make a statement) then use data from your results section to back up this claim
i.e. This is just one of your sentences
After doing some research on the internet, I knew it would take over a good hour for most fizzy drinks to flatten
Previous research indicates that it would take approximately one hour for most fizzy drinks to flatten (reference where you go this information). This statement is correct as (insert the time that it took for the drinks to flatten)
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It sounds like you took on a project just a slight bit to simple; however it does have application, and overall makes for a good read.
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great x